Five times Fraser said no, by china_shop.

[boxofdelights]

Five times Fraser said no, by china_shop. Rated General Audiences. RayK/Fraser.

Your comments feed my hungry heart. I do not wish to dissuade you from praise, but I am trying to get better at this, so constructive criticism is also welcome.

Comments

[jesse_the_k]

I like the subtle and distinctive ways you alter your voice to match Ray's & Fraser's voice patterns. (Great Canadian "oh" sound on the final "no"s!)

The pauses between the sections are just the right length.

I agree that you need to find a register for narration that's as comfortable as your handling of dialogue. Perhaps personifying "china_shop" as a character, if only in your head?

Two of my favorite things:

1. The fics you're choosing are "greatest hits of Due South short works," so you're curating the fandom as you record.

2. There's a joy in your voice that multiplies the generous fanfic impulse.

Thanks!

[boxofdelights]

Thank you so much.